Shadows show the depth of the piece.

Depth in Wood – Depth in Writing

Carve Out the Depth in Your Writing

I have been a woodcarver for over 15 years and a fiction writer for over five years. I’ve read Dean Wesley Smith’s articles about the depth and Stages of a Fiction Writer. His post led me to a comparison of the stages of a woodcarver.  In stage one Smith says fiction writing is all about sentences, grammar and punctuation.

In the first stage of woodcarving is all about the knife, the wood and making those first cuts. There is a level of fear involved as you try to avoid cutting yourself and bleeding all over. You fear the knife and fear making cuts that are too deep. The fear causes you to carve deep.  You nick the surface without a strong impression. To your eyes you feel you have created a masterpiece of art. To others the piece is boring and lacks depth. After years of experimentation and development of skills you no longer fear the knife and cut away with confidence and create pieces with depth and emotion.

The Same Holds for Fiction Writing

At first you fear going too deep into your characters’ point of view. Then you fear making your characters bleed on the page and you end up with a shallow piece of writing that nicks the surface and give shallow emotions. You don’t want to hurt your characters or have to struggle too hard to fix their wounds. You might think your piece is a work of art. But your readers feel no spark of emotion and the characters all end up in shallow, happy lives. It’s boring and lacks depth.

I read a piece by P.J. Reece (Story Structure Expedition: Journey to the Heart of a Story). In this article, he discusses finding the heart of your story as a writer.  He talks about writing to a depth to which your protagonist has reached the “pits of despair”. Only then will he be able to experience a “subsequent change of heart.”

Reece says: Down there, that’s where we discover the truth about our human condition. The best protagonists glimpse the ugly truth and see a way to rise above it–above themselves.

 In my experience writing a romantic comedy I had all the elements of a good story. But it fell short of shining as the piece I wanted it to be. Going back over it I realized I had not caused my protagonist to suffer enough, even though this was a romantic comedy. I feared going too deep into the character so focused on the words, grammar and punctuation more than the story itself. I went back in with a sharper knife and made deeper cuts. The protagonist reached the pits of despair to lost her love, lost her job, lost her old way of thinking and being.

Reaching the bottom freed her to see what was possible and what would make her happy again.  The protagonist now had room to change and grow and the story took on a new depth and possibility.  Reaching the bottom did not lessen the humor of the story but enriched it through more intense contrast of despair and joy.

Like the finished work, a wood carving shows shadows in its cuts. The more cuts, the more shadows. Shadows show the depth of the piece. As we say in the wood carving world – keep carving. So, also, to you writers – keep carving.

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Being Collaborative. Sometimes we are so close to our story focus our writing becomes narrow and we fail to see possible new directions to follow.

Does Collaborative Fiction Writing Work

The Collaborative Connection

Writing is a solitary endeavor, most of the times.  Each writer expresses their personal experiences, observations and opinions while they write. They claim ownership of their characters and stories and take pride in, or become protective of what they’ve created.

So is collaborative fiction writing possible? Does it work? Or, do too many cooks spoil the broth?

I have completed five novels in collaboration with another writer.  Writing with a partner can be difficult and frustrating.  However, it also has numerous benefits. 1) Speed up production by increased volume – two vs. one. 2) Strengthening tasks by working together – two heads are better than one.

Here are some of my observations about collaborative fiction writing:

  • Inspiration – Having another person to discuss plot points or characters gives you a new perspective. Sometimes we are so close to our story focus our writing becomes narrow and we fail to see possible new directions to follow.
  • Motivation – Working a full-time job plus normal daily living provide ample excuses not to write. Having another person wait for you to finish your part gives you a push to get it done. It also helps when the other person is a nag who won’t leave you alone and makes you feel guilty for not writing.
  • New perspective through differences of opinion – Arguing over a story direction or character can give you a different perspective about your writing. Voicing strong opinions can help you to see your story from a different angle. You can talk (or argue) out problems and find a resolution if need be.
  • Something to talk about – Writing with a roommate or partner gives you something to talk about on long car rides or when going out for dinner together for the millionth time. Discussing ways to kill your characters, or motivations for keeping them from falling in love, can be stimulating. It’s also amusing to observe the faces of other diners in your vicinity who listen in on your conversations.
  • Provide a reason to avoid conversation – When you don’t feel like socializing collaboration gives you a legitimate reason to avoid talking with your partner. We always bring along notebooks and pens and if we don’t feel like talking, we write (or pretend to write). It works great.
  • Trust, compromise, giving in – Successful collaboration requires building trust in your partner’s writing. Compromise may help your work. Sometimes giving in will end arguments and keep the project going.
  • Letting go to move forward – Sometimes if compromise does not work you need to learn to let go of a collaborative piece and work on your own for a while. And as the dust settles, you can forgive each other and get back to the project. It becomes easier to join forces once again and combine the work you have done independently into a cohesive piece.
  • Communication – It is important for collaborators to communicate while working on a joint piece of writing. Sometimes the best ways to keep lines of communication open are through the use of humor. Be flexible and do not get so attached to your fictional characters, so you put them ahead of real live people.
  • Learning – Collaborating with another writer can teach you how to improve your own writing by observing their successes or failures and applying them to your own work. You can also learn through the shared research or life experiences each of you bring to the story.
  • Research – Taking research trips together or spending time in archives hunting down research for your story can be exciting. Almost like an archeological dig during which you unearth some unusual item, character, letter, diary, myths, or legends that bring a new twist to your fiction.
  • Slowing down production – having to wait for the other person to finish their part of the story can cause delays and loss of interest. By the time they finish their section you may have moved on to something new and fresh. Sometimes it is difficult to bring your mind and enthusiasm back to an old story.
  • Disappointment – Working with a collaborator can lead to disappointment. This may be true if you have worked hard on a section and you become excited by the direction your characters are going. But then you share your ideas with your collaborator their comments show they didn’t share your vision at all. You may have to change to another direction.

Working with a writing partner who is also a life partner reminds me of an old movie, Best Friends, starring Goldie Hawn and Burt Reynolds. The story is about two screenwriters who lived and worked together. At one point they are locked together in a room and forced to finish writing a script. Too much togetherness leads them to argue and break up.

Collaborative writing doesn’t always work. It is important to make sure you don’t have too much togetherness.  Having separate adventures, friends, experiences and interests allow you to bring unique perspectives to your collaborative work. This strengthens you work and gives your work more depth and emotion

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Does collaborative fiction writing work

Lucy Watches Me When I Write

Your Collaborative Team is There For You

Really – Does collaborative fiction writing work? Do those you collaborate with impede your writing? Do they squash your creativity?

Maybe so, but most likely not.

Soon I will post ‘Does Collaborative Fiction Writing Work’. This may be true for those who have collaborators who cooperate with the writer. ‘Writing is usually a solitary endeavor.’

But then, when my cat Lucy jumps up and sits next to my keyboard it’s hard to shoo her away. She calms my nerves when she sits still. I gently rub my hand on her soft fur and gently call her name. That’s fine. But when she wants to lie down and make herself comfortable her paws find the keyboard and extra letters jump onto the screen. So much for having a cat around to calm the nerves.

Now the Nerves Settled

It’s time to stop procrastinating. Set goals. Regular meetings will make sure everyone is in agreement and focused. Keep writing.

Having a special friend around makes the days seem brighter? In writing, could collaborative writing help your story? Would collaborative writing help you to be a better writer?

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